2- Jekyll & Hyde
0-A rollercoaster ride
7-Always up and down, round and round
9-Making my stomach churn and heave with nervous tension
4-Wondering when it is
6-Going to all come crashing down
3-Praying for peace
3-Praying for help
4-Searching for some clarity
2-For freedom
I am not sure about the ending of this poem. The #2 just doesn’t feel quite right. I was thinking about changing it to 2- To leave.. or To change, but those really weren’t quite right either. I’m just looking for two words that make it all stop… the stress, the chaos, the uncertainty… to be free from chains/burdens/repression/abuse. Maybe I will try to play with this one before the end of the month.
Write 4 Today 
Sometimes we need to let our first attempt rest and keep coming back top it to find how it will ring truest for us.
I am really intrigued by this format. I will need to play around with it some.
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I look forward to trying out this format because I haven’t tried it yet. Sometimes, I like to walk away from a piece of writing for awhile in order to allow it to marinate. Then, I often find that when I finally revisit the piece, I’m able to look at it with fresh eyes.
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What a fun idea! I think I’ll try one! Thanks for sharing. Poems seem easy, but the word choice is essential to its effectiveness. You did a lovely job.
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